Sunday, March 16, 2008

The Day She Learnt

Once upon a time
There was a girl
Who wanted to fall in love

She went up a cliff
and jumped
She fell on a flower

It was a rose
Thorns punctured her soft skin
But the rose petals wiped away her blood stains

It was the day she learnt what love is
It hurts
It makes you cry
But it wipes away your tears.............. softly


Raven said...

A balance of pain and pleasure.

I guess we're always getting lost somewhere in between :)

Big Pearls said...

nicely written

Ms. Baker said...

Bloody tears...

I am anemic now.

Beautiful, Flamflooma.

Jewaira said...


Love is many things

I like the image of falling onto a flower

perhaps a bed of flowers too...

Judy Abbot said...

thats love i never met.

G and L said...

ma tiswa ;p

TOUCHE' said...

The true definition of love in its simplest forms. Exquisitely written.

Those scars caused by thorns are a constant remembrance of the worthiest journey ever.

Flamingoliya said...

Thank you all for stopping by and commenting :)

one day enshalla

g and l
sheno eli mayiswa?